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Elysium

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Rain washed over the sky, thunder cracked, a sudden storm hit the city of Glasgow, multiple delinquents speaking in their basterdised version of what they called the English language. Rachel walked into the nearest shop to escape the rain, looking around as she took a seat, the warmth surrounded her as she hugged into herself giving a small shiver as the rain had already soaked her through to the bones.

"Miss, would you like a coffee" a voice spoke from beside her, a female waitress, who was a small amount concerned of the girl who shivered in the soft seat, table infront of her.

"That would be lovely, thanks, can I get one sugar please." Rachel smiled reading the name tag on the girls left breast, 'Debbie' such a nice name, it cooed almost in her head making her smile that not all friendliness has dissapeared from this country that she loved, just the people in it made her sick to her stomach. Sometimes she would almost gag when a drunk would come up smelling of urine and alcohol asking for fifty pence for a bus ride or some stupid excuse, but everyone knew who that it was just to buy more alcohol.

"There you are." The teenage waitress placed the cup down on the table while Rachel was lost in her daze about the scum of Scotland. Debbie stood up straight looking out the rain blemished window. "What a day, it was so nice earlier." She said looking behind her to the clock, Four, thirty. "Well atleast I'll get off soon."

"Well atleast thats good news." The brown haired girl smiled as she held the cup of coffee in her hands allowing it to heat her up blowing on it a little before taking a small sip wincing a little as it burnt her tastebuds, but the scolding heat made her warm almost instantly.

"Are you alright?" Debbie took a knee down beside Rachel as she put the cup down on the table smiling a bit.

"Yeah, I'm fine. Thanks for asking, umm.." She pretended to read the name tag "...Debbie, pleasure to meet you, I'm Rachel." She held out her hand in a friendly manner. Rachel had little friends as it was as she refused to join a social label as it was. She despised delinquents, and hated the term goth and emo.

"Pleasure to meet you Rachel, hey I'm about to get off in half an hour" Debbie took another look around to the clock to see her boss a rather old man with a friendly face.

"On you go Debbie, If it continues to trains will go off." The old man said in a soft caring voice. Debbie smiled a little standing up as she finished her sentance.

"Well, I see you dont have an umbrella, would you like to leave together?" Debbie questioned.

"Sure, i'll just pay for this and i'm ready." Rachel smiled a little standing up fishing through her jacket pockets, Placing a few pounds on the table beside the coffee. As Debbie had already left to get her jacket and umbrella. Wandering out of the staff room, ready.

"Ready to tackle this?" Debbie smiled a little as she held the umbrella in her right hand as she left the coffee shop opening it up so that Rachel could get under aswell. Smiling back at Debbie, Rachel got underneathe a little shy at first, but none the less she got under walked along the shiny road as the rain lay a thin sheet of wetness listening to the pitter patter of the rain against the black umbrella. Wandering up through the workers area of scaffolding, which gave a brief moment of no sound what so ever as the upper levels of the scaffolding covered them, Debbie stopped handing the umbrella to Rachel, "Here, I just need to cross the road and I'm pretty much home." She pointed to the trainstation, running across the road once it was clear waving back at Rachel.

Rachel felt a little down once her new friend had just left, she didnt even know how to get in contact with Debbie again other than going to that coffee shop to see if she was there or not. Several minutes passed as Debbie sat on one of the green metal seats, waiting on her train shivering a little as she looked to her side seeing someone sit beside her with their hood up, the small amount of fur trimming the hood soaked and made it look rather messy, a closed up umbrella in her hands as she handed back to Debbie, pulling her hood down smiling a little. "I needed to give you this back, and plus my gran lives in Paisley."

"Thanks." Debbie looked down to her Umbrella as the train pulled into the station. Rachel stood first holding her hand out to Debbie, taking hold of it Debbie blushed a little as she pulled herself up with the help of the Brown haired girl. Wandering over slowly to the train some 'scum' as Rachel put it, pushed by them to get onto the Train before the two. As they sat down in the seats which had a table between them, they chatted all the way until they got to Paisley Canal street station. Then along Espadair street, Rachel stopped halfway as she waved goodbye to Debbie as they had arranged to meet up at the root of the hill behind the High flats the next day.

Rachel stood at the hill looking to her watch, the sun beating down on the glass face making it difficult to read, she could barely make out the time but from what she could see it was half past two, the time they had arranged, and as planned the blonde ran along the path wearing a pair of tight blue jeans and a black top showing part of her midriff, while Rachel was a little more elegant, wearing a pink polka dot dress, her brown hair in pigtails. "D-debbie." Rachel stuttered for a moment as she could'nt help but look at what she was wearing. Hours of walking around the Hill the two walked down the path which led right around the hill to the shops. Debbie buying them some 'munchies' as Debbie put it, before walking back up the hill, it was a peaceful day due to it being far too early for the delinquents to be awake. Both of them ate the food sweets mostly smiling at each other, Rachel accidently spilling some of the chocolate from the squeezable tube of chocolate onto her cheek.

"Ahn~" Debbie parted her lips sticking her tongue out licking slowly up Rachel's cheek to clean it in a way. Which made Rachel blush harshly, she had never felt attracted to girls but she was starting to feel something for Debbie, both girls looked at each other. Debbie looked down a bit, as she leant forward kissing Rachel, pressing her down onto the soft grass no protest from Rachel at all, slowly she parted from the girl she had just kissed. "Rachel..."

"Debbie..?"

"You are my elysium."
Yeah, sorry for like not uploading in god knows how long, but this was inspired off two friends.. Two friends who once loved each other now parted It was like a year ago though so yeah. I don't know what It came up now but, yeah.

Please enjoy!! Dx Its my first time writing Romance Yuri. Yes, Yuri. D:< This might be a one shot, or depending on the response i might write more on Rachel and Debbie.

Thesaurus:

Elysium- 1. Greek Mythology The Elysian Fields. ( Heaven )
2. A place or condition of ideal happiness.
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Daaaahhh. This is really good, write more I wanna know what happens next !! xD